本文是一篇关于中考英语满分作文的原创摘要。文章以800字的篇幅详细介绍了中考英语满分作文的要求和技巧,并提供了一些实用的写作建议。通过阅读本文,读者可以更好地理解中考英语作文的评分标准,提高自己的写作水平。
第一篇
寒窗苦读三年之久尽在中考一搏。有句“另类古语”说得好:“天将降大任于斯人也,必先历其千辛,习其百卷,搏其一考。”可我还想加一句:“极其无奈。”
三年考卷应过万,三年辛苦该过千。可心底里总不十分踏实。初三的学生,时间如金,可能有夸张,不过也实情。
明天就是挤独木桥的日子,我在“题海”中忙碌着,蓦然发现:“忙”也可分三六九等。忙的时候叫踏实,很忙的时候叫充实;忙得脚跟打后脑勺的时候那叫无所适从,真忙到气都不能喘时,反倒不气急败坏。心里骂着万恶的应试教育时,嚷嚷
着:“孙子才考重点中学呢!”可偏偏还得干孙子才做的事。
老爸进来了,手里拿着几支派克:“小子,换换你的装备吧!”我默默地接过笔,感觉好像接过救生艇的桨。老爸拍了拍我的肩,无声地笑了笑,当我以为老爸的“临考动员”已“千呼万唤始出来”,不料竟“犹抱琵琶半遮面”。“好好考吧!”相对无言,心里觉得比长篇大论还要令人心情沉重。
老妈也“粉墨登场”,端着碗小米粥,叫我停下来休息一会儿,一边心疼地摸着我的手:“手都生老茧了。”老妈拍了拍我的头,便走出了房间。
敲9点,表哥夜自修归来,发现我仍在奋笔疾书,便先放下手头的活儿,等我先完成。当我停下来准备漱洗时,他脱下那只Nike的新款手表,扔给我:“拿着,注意把握好答卷的时间!”我无语,默默地道了句:“Thankyou!”拿着碗,握着笔,摆弄着手表,发觉自己竟已落泪了,还有什么比得上在考前得到父母兄长的关爱更令人感动的呢?我遥望着星空,想想明天就是中考,三年的艰辛在这一考,成王败寇就看明天,我相信只要老爸老妈老哥的心与我同在的话,明天的挑战我就一定能赢!
后记
粗硬的派克正在舞动,已被小米粥填饱的肚子正在供给能量,Nike在忠实大地记录时间……
第二篇
中考考生必看:中考英语状元分享英语学习经验
主持人:各位E度访谈的朋友们大家好。欢迎收看本期的E度访谈。今天我们非常高兴的请来了我们的英语高手李雯靓同学,李雯靓同学跟大家打一个招呼。
李雯靓:嗨。
主持人:还有李雯靓的任课老师尹老师。
尹老师:Hello,大家好。
主持人:非常高兴请来了这一对师生。接下来我想让我们的英语高手们跟大家分享一下她的英语是怎么取得高分的。先问一下雯靓,雯靓这一次中考的英语考了多少分啊?
李雯靓:119分。
主持人:我们满分120分,他考了119分,真的很厉害。我想问一下,你觉得哪一块错了一分特?
李雯靓:应该是作文。
主持人:其他的部分都全对是吗?
李雯靓:对。
主持人:这个分数真的是很厉害。一定要跟大家介绍介绍是怎么样的学习方法和态度导致了雯靓同学取得了那么高的分数呢?
李雯靓:英语就是日常积累很重要,要从初一开始,在课内该背的要背,在课外要多做一些完形和阅读,关于完形,基础知识的积累,像词意和句子中的用法都要记的很牢固。要想挑战很高分,要多做一些高中的完形和阅读。
主持人:要想得高分,要做一些高中的完形是吗?
李雯靓:对。
主持人:那些词汇不是都不认识吗。
李雯靓:那就要做一篇查一篇,这样慢慢的词汇就多起来了
主持人:就是雯靓在做的时候就是做一篇,同时不是做完了就放那儿了,而是要把这一篇文章中的生词摘出来,自己再记是吗?日积月累就可以让自己的完形做的比较顺。这是一个好的办法。阅读的C篇和D篇对学生来说都很难。
李雯靓:阅读平时要多读英语文章,训练自己的语感,猜出来,看不懂可以联系上下文可以猜出来。
主持人:给大家介绍介绍你平常都读哪些英文读物呢?
李雯靓:英文读物,像现在市面上卖的每天读一句英文比较好。
主持人:这是一本杂志吗?
李雯靓:是一本书。
主持人:叫每天读一句是吗?
李雯靓:对。
主持人:你是读一句,还是背下来呢?
李雯靓:当然要背下来。
主持人:看来是每日背一句话了。那么写作这一块满分15分,你得14分也很不容易,写作这一块,是怎么样提高的呢?
李雯靓:我觉得还是背范文,各个区的范文写的都很好,句式和用词相对学生来讲很熟练的,读起来很舒服。
主持人:我能不能问一下,你有没有计算过自己一共背了多少篇范文。
李雯靓:各个区的有的不止背了一遍,2009年开始各区的模拟作文我都背过的。
主持人:2009、2010年两年的范文对吗?
李雯靓:对。
主持人:一年有一模、二模,城八区加起来就是16篇,还有各区县的,你大概背了60篇范文是吗?
李雯靓:对。
主持人:你在听课的过程中怎么样听老师讲更高效一点呢?
李雯靓:听课的时候不要老师说要记一下再听,他平时讲的笑话什么的,里面的语法结构很多。
主持人:老师还给你们讲笑话是吗?
李雯靓:是。
第三篇
1. 动笔之前,认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
3. 语言通顺,表达准确
避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1) 语态、时态要准确无误。
2) 主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4) 注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如:
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。 .
B. 省略号
C. 顿号 、 无
描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
1) 外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2) 服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3) 内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4) 感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5) 动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or
2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however
3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that
4) 表示空间关系的过渡词:near , far , in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside
5) 表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as
6) 表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though
7) 表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again
8) 表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result
9) 表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually
10) 表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important
11) 表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to,
12) 表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as
13) 表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking
4. 不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话: 错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分 。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。
小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。
5. 锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:
句型多样化,不要I(We) 到底,使人觉得乏味。
适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。
进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句。
适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词。
偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感。
适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。
6. 书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
7. 写完之后,勿忘检查
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
格式是否有错。
拼写有无错误。
语言是否用错。
时态、语态错误。
标点错误。
人称是否用错。
【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动,以免顾此失彼,影响全局。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。
第四篇
高考英语满分作文
假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文,唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台
注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛—talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五篇
初一英语作文带翻译
I what busied one day, the body that dragging exhaustion sits silently on the balcony to syare blankly, come stealthily towards evening, late wind slowly had blown, left the cool trace of filar silk. But the balcony that also cannot bake sun broil hair is very hotly is wrapped cool. Dark, bird is less and less also, the damage that a string of bird left in the sky cries. The sun that worked one day also took off coverall, it is no longer in that way dazzling. The tender broadness that the sun that changes new clothes also changes is elegant, lovely. Tell the truth the sun can be met really choose color. The clothes that you see her wear is much more beautiful, red is blaze that one the most beautiful one color in the layer. Withered and yellow is squashy orange just was picked on the tree that orange is yellow. Foil in so beautiful color the cheek that issued arch to give a piece of peaceful. She seems to be being monitored by others same, stealthily move is moving pace, appear that kind is lightsome. Knowing at this moment is who is make a practical joke, in her that is high and scatter on luxuriant clothes went up prepared Chinese ink makes her dress becomes bit more full of stains or spots, ased if to throw one Jiao in wallow. Right now she is like a girl bashful and same, blush so that resemble squashy persimmon. Perhaps she feels embarrassed to used white gauze cloak to live then half face. Passed for ages, perhaps be she feels to be done so also of no help cowardly cowardly ground comes out to appear that kind is bashful. Then she thinks 36 plan -- go for the best thing to do, be smooth! Apparent its speed appears than a moment ago much faster, she is floating die of small blush Pang is in then later hilltop. The sky appears deserted. Again scan widely hopes horizon appeared again her form, hey! How be like two different people with foregoing the setting sun, move close to again look, it is the moon that Yin Guangshan shows so. Dark, appear soundless in that way all around.
翻译:
忙碌了一天的我,拖着疲劳的身体静静的坐在阳台上发呆,傍晚悄悄来临,晚风缓缓的吹过,留下了丝丝的凉意.但也不能将太阳炙烤得发烫的阳台裹凉.天黑了,鸟儿也愈来愈少,天空中留下了一串鸟的残鸣。
工作了一天的太阳也脱下了工作服,不再是那样刺眼。换上新装的太阳也变的温柔阔雅,楚楚动人。说实话太阳可真会挑颜色。你看她穿的衣服多漂亮,红的是火焰那一层一层中最美的颜色。枯黄的是树上刚摘下来熟透的桔子那桔黄。在这样美丽的颜色衬托下拱出了一张恬静的脸蛋。她好像被别人监视着一样,悄悄的挪移着步伐,显得那般轻盈。
这时不知道是谁在搞恶作剧,在她那高贵而又华丽的衣裳上撒上了墨汁使她的衣服变得斑斑点点,仿佛在泥坑里摔了一跤。此时她好像一个小姑娘害羞一样,脸红得象熟透的柿子。也许她觉得难堪于是便用白纱遮掩住了一半脸。过了好久,也许是她觉得这样做也无济于事便怯怯地出来显得那般羞涩。于是她便想三十六计——走为上策,溜!显然它的速度显得比刚才快多了,之后她那泛着微红脸庞消逝在山头。天空则显得空荡荡的。再放眼一望天际又出现了她的身影,哎!怎么跟先前的夕阳判若两人,再凑近一看,原来是银光闪闪的月亮。
天黑了,四周则显得那样静悄悄。
第六篇
本文是一篇高三寒假英语作文,题目为newspaper and computer,文章表达了作者对网络的喜爱之情,下面就让我们一起来欣赏全文吧!
高三寒假英语作文:newspaper and computer(带翻译)
as the development of the internet, the traditional way of reading daily news has been challenged, more and more people trend to read news online, while still some people insist on reading it on the newspaper. people argue which is the best way for reading news, in my opinion, there is no best way, different people choose different manner.
随着网络的发展,阅读新闻的传统方式已经受到了挑战,越来越多的人倾向于在网上看新闻,然而仍然有一部分人坚持看报纸。人们争辩哪种是看新闻的最好方式,在我看来,没有最好的方式,不同的人会选择不同的方式。
reading news online is fast and paying for free. most young people get used to it, they use the computer every day, so that they count on the computer to receive the all kinds of information. reading the newspaper is troublesome, they don’t like to hold the paper, it is not convenient.
在网上看新闻快速且不用钱。大部分年轻人习惯这个方式,他们每天使用电脑,因此他们依赖电脑来接收各种信息。看报纸很麻烦,他们不喜欢拿着报纸,很不方便。
while still many people like to read on the newspaper. especially the old generation, before the popularity of computer, they read the news from the newspaper, they get used to this manner, even the computer is convenient, they just like to keep this habit.
然而仍然有很多人喜欢看报纸。特别是老一代,在电脑流行前,他们通过报纸来看新闻,习惯了这种方式,即使电脑很方便,他们还是喜欢保持看报纸的习惯。
the ways to read news are various, there is no need to compare them. i’d prefer to read it on the internet, but sometimes i find reading it newspaper brings me fun when i have breakfast.
看新闻的方式是多种多样的,没有必要进行对比。我比较喜欢在网络上看,但是有时候在吃早餐时看报纸能给我带来乐趣。
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第七篇
作文之祖国在我心中 作文之祖国在我心中(带翻译)
Everyone has their own country, perhaps in your mind, is a great country it is warm. Yes, in my mind, the motherland is our backbone.
When at 2:28 p.m. on May 12, 2008. An earthquake, and suddenly all local Shanbengdilie,. A primary school and a kindergarten at the same time not far from being razed to the ground. Is full of cries, there are more than 800 parents cried in their own hands Grilled ruins! "Where a cadre in the village!" Parents are angry asks. A cadre shouted: "I am the village cadres, my own son at the bottom with you is more concerned about saving their own children, Whose children are saved without it." Hardly faded from the parents line up a team and consciously. Wait for rescue. In a few days, the rescue team saved a few of the 70 children, buried several village cadres. A cadre recalls, buried so many people, small children, themselves do not care to save, and they decided to save the smallest. It made me very moved, but also let me know the backbone of our country, if not mother nurture so many outstanding cadres to rescue us, we can see this beautiful world?
Of the motherland, ah! The motherland, you really like a mother呀! , I will never forget you, I will reward you well!
每一个人都有自己的祖国,也许在你们的心中,祖国是伟大的,是温暖的。是的,在我的心中,祖国是我们的支柱。
第八篇
本文是一篇高中三年级寒假英语,题目为learn to give up,文章表达了作者对学会放弃的喜爱之情,下面就让我们一起来欣赏全文吧!
高中三年级寒假英语作文:learn to give up(带翻译)
when we encourage people, we will always tell them not to give up, they can be successful if they insist. “never give up” have been the inspiring words, people accept them as the positive life attitude. however, sometimes if people insist all the time and never change, these inspiring words are not wise to keep.
当我们鼓励人们,我们总会告诉他们不要放弃,如果坚持下去,就能成功。“不要放弃”已经成为了鼓励用词,人们接受它们,把这当做乐观的生活态度。然而,有时候,如果人们一直坚持,不作出改变,坚持这些励志的词语就不明智了。
people should learn to give up sometimes. parents think study is very important, so they ask their kids to insist to learn and go to college. but the fact is that not all the kids are good at study, some kids are not interested in study, they are good at other things. parents should not push their children to go to college, the kids can learn the things they are good at, like cooking, amending cars and so on. going to college is not the only way to be successful, learning the practical skills also makes them successful.
有时候人们应该学着去放弃。父母认为学习是很重要的,因此他们要求孩子坚持学习,直到上大学。但是事实上,并不是所有的孩子擅长学习,一些孩子对学习不感兴趣,他们擅长别的东西。父母不应该逼迫孩子上大学,孩子可以学习他们擅长的东西,比如烹饪,修汽车等等。上大学并不是成功的唯一出路,学会使用的技巧同样也能成功。
people must know clearly what they are insisting, if they keep the right direction, they should insist, but if they keep the wrong direction, they need to give up and open another new chapter of their lives.
人们必须清楚知道他们坚持的是什么,如果他们保持的是对的方向,他们应该坚持下去,但是如果他们走的是错误的方向,他们需要放弃,展开人生的新篇章。
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第九篇
Plan for English Learning
I’m a middle school student. I love English, but it’s hard for me. Now I have a good plan to learn English。
I have a pronunciation problem. I can’t pronounce so well. So I plan to listen to the tape and read after it. I can’t read English passages quickly and can’t write a passage clearly. Now I plan to read more and practice writing often. As for listening, sometimes I can’t understand what others are saying. So I plan to improve myself by listening to the radio and TV. Grammar is the most difficult for me. I have no idea of it, but I think my English teacher can help me with it。
With this English-learning plan, I’m hoping for great progress。
译文:
英语学习计划
我是一名中学生。我喜欢英语,但是对我来说却很难。现在我有一个很好的英语学习计划。
我的发音有点问题。我发音不好。所以我打算听磁带并跟读。我不能快速地阅读英语文章,也不能清清楚楚地写文章。现在我计划看多些书,经常练习写作。至于听力,有时候我无法理解其他人在说什么。所以我打算通过听收音机和电视来提高我自己。对我来说语法是最难的。我都不知道怎么办,不过我觉得我的英语老师能够帮助我。
有了这个英语学习计划,我希望能取得很大的进步。
第十篇
I like English most, because English is so popular these days. As far as I’m concerned, English is a well-known international language. If I could speak English well, I would be able to communicate with the people all over the world。
Nowadays, English is widely used in news, business, communication and tourism. Especially after China enters WTO, our country needs more genius who is good at English. Mastering English can help us find more job opportunities。
What’s more, some English speaking countries like Australia, New Zealand, America and Canada are very beautiful. I want to travel to these countries very much. So I must learn English well。
译文
我最喜欢的课程——英语
我最喜欢英语,因为英语在这段时间很流行。我觉得英语是总所周知的国际语言。如果我能说好英语,我就可以和世界各地的人交流了。
如今,英语在新闻,商务,通信和旅游上被广泛使用。尤其是在中国加入WTO之后,我国需要更多擅长英语的人才。掌握英语能帮助我们找到更多的就业机会。
更重要的是,一些说英语的国家如澳大利亚,新西兰,美国和加拿大都很漂亮。我非常想去那些国家旅行。所以我必须学好英语。
第十一篇
冲动的后果英语作文_The Result of Impulsion
People always say that impulsion is the demon, but only the one who has experienced this unhappy moment can feel the horrible result. I remembered that when I was five years old, I was young and reckless. Someday, my friends took my favorite toy to play, and I asked them to be careful, but suddenly they dropped down my toy and made it into the water. I was so angry and asked them to leave, telling them that I hated them. My friends were sorry and shocked, and they left after hearing my angry words. After a few days, I washed my toy and it was clean again, then I started to feel regretful for saying the horrible words. We were not as closed as before. I felt like losing friends for my impulsion.
人们总是说,冲动是魔鬼,但只有当一个人经历了这不幸的时刻才能感受到这可怕的后果。我记得,在我五岁的时候,我年少不懂事。有一天,我的朋友拿了我最喜欢的玩具去玩,我叫他们要小心了,可是他们还是突然把我的玩具弄掉了,还掉进入水中。我很生气叫他们离开,并且对他们说我恨他们。我的朋友表示了抱歉也感到很震惊,听到我愤怒的话后就走了。几天后,我把玩具洗干净了,开始为说了可怕的话而感到后悔。我们再也不再像以前那样亲密了。因为冲动,我觉得我失去了朋友。