第一篇
With father a finger-guessing game
Huang Yuying
A day, I and father play the game of stone scissors cloth in the courtyard. Above all, I think father can give cloth, so I gave a scissors, result father gave a stone, I was defeated, I am very sad, I ask father: "Father, how do you know I meet those who give scissors! " father says: "Because,be inside the game of stone scissors cloth, the first is stone, so I a stone. " my heart thinks, father was duped, I wait fall to give cloth first. Passed a little while, I make a noise again the game that father and I play stone scissors cloth, result, father the first gave scissors, I regret really, father was not duped, myself was duped instead, early know such I give a stone first. Father is really tricky, he begins to think scheme again. Spent half hour again, I look for father to play the game of stone scissors cloth again, result pa gave a cloth, I gave a scissors casually, I won, I understood a reason: First time failure does not groan, if tried hard to be met certainly,succeed oh! Because failure is the mother of the success, all things are such oh!
Judge: How so clever, can be you summed up so? Still write so interestingly!
You see you progress is how old!
第二篇
With father a finger-guessing game
Huang Jiaxin
One day, father and daughter go to a park together a finger-guessing game. They are playing sheep happy a sheep and ash too the game of the wolf! Won possibly when beautiful Yang Yang, washed-up is become grey too wolf! Result, conqueror and failure came out! Result, the daughter was defeated, father won. The daughter is laughing to say archly: "Ah! Father, you were defeated. You were defeated..
Fall in their foot, have a lot of a lot of not famous flowers, crying for them cheer! Have yellow, red, flower people in show lovely color to us.
They are really happy today!
Judge: Clear and coherent, the word is written well, wrote scene the activity that kept a person again, so, teacher one glad, you with respect to 100 minutes.